Series: Avena #1
Published by Bloomsbury on March 2013
Genres: Fantasy, Young Adult
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For as long as Ebony can remember, she's been sheltered. Confined to her home in a secluded valley, home-schooled by her protective parents, and limited to a small circle of close friends. It's as if she's being hidden. But something is changing in Ebony. Something that can't be concealed. She's growing more beautiful by the day, she's freakishly strong, and then there's the fact that she's glowing.
On one fateful night, Ebony meets Jordan and she's intensely drawn to him. It's as if something explodes inside of her--something that can be seen from the heavens. Ebony still doesn't know that she's a stolen angel, but now that the heavens have found her, they want her back
This story is told from both the perspectives of Ebony, a violet eyed teenager who until recently was home schooled and has never left the valley her parents farm is located on, and Jordon, a tough kid in foster care who has had one too many things go wrong in his young life. When these two meet for the first time there is an instant connection that changes both of their worlds as you discover about Ebony’s past and her bond with Jordon.
I have never read this author before though she has a big fan base so I was really looking forward to giving this book a go. Hidden is marketed as a YA novel though I was quite puzzled by this at the beginning as it read more like a middle grade book to me, and what put me off completely was that the characters would use phrases that are definitely more adult like such as “wondering which girl he would be leaving the club with tonight”. I felt that this was quite a contradiction and not a particularly good one, especially if young teens are going to pick this book up. As the story warms up, probably about a third of the way through, it definitely hits its stride and gets both interesting and settles into a more YA writing style.
Ebony was a frustrating character, she starts off quite interesting, there is something different about her and she knows that she hears better than your average person and has above average strength and speed. Her parents are quite closed off and wont tell her and for some reason she doesn’t push them about it for years. When you find out about her back story you would expect her to become even more interesting and want to learn more about her past however instead she becomes a stubborn mule who is completely unhelpful and provides 90% of the conflict and barriers in the story. Definitely an unenjoyable heroine for the most part.
Jordon was more interesting however I’m not really sure where his storyline will take him for the remainder of the book series and I hope that they go into more details about the guardian/angel relationship as this seemed to be such a pivotal point in the book yet it was completely glossed over and barely mentioned again. There is some interesting back story about Jordon and his previous foster home experience that I found quite interesting and I’m not entirely sure what Adam Skinner’s role is going to be for future books but I fully expect it to be fleshed out in the sequel.
I did really enjoy Thane and the angels this was the highlight of the novel and I’m glad that this is really the heart of the overall story. I quite liked Prince Luca as a baddy and Thane was wonderfully patient with both Ebony and Jordon. I’m looking forward to finding out more about Thane’s destiny and the angel homeworld Avena! While I’m not the biggest fan of insta love I think the storyline does compensate in this case for Thane and Ebony and I am looking forward to some nice romance in the future books.
Overall this was a fast and fairly enjoyable read and though the book did have some flaws I would definitely pick up book 2 to find out what happens next. In saying that this definitely was not in the same league as the Unearthly trilogy by Cynthia Hand or The Violet Eden Chapters by Jessica Shirvington – both of which are completely brilliant angel series that I try to convince all friends to read.
– Enjoyable but flawed, easy read!