Review: Elusion, Claudia Gabel & Cheryl Klam

June 20, 2014 Reviews 0 ★★½

Review: Elusion, Claudia Gabel & Cheryl KlamElusion by Cheryl Klam, Claudia Gabel
Published by Katherine Tegen Books on March 2014
Genres: Dystopia, Young Adult
Pages: 400
Source: Edelweiss
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Soon, Elusion will change the world and life as we know it.

A new technology called Elusion is sweeping the country. An app, visor and wristband will virtually transport you to an exotic destination where adventure can be pursued without the complications—or consequences—of real life.

Regan is an Elusion insider. Or at least she used to be. Her father invented the program, and her best friend, Patrick, heir to the tech giant Orexis, is about to release it nationwide. But ever since her father’s unexpected death, Regan can’t bear to Escape, especially since waking up from the dream means crashing back to her grim reality.

Still, when there are rumours of trouble in Elusion—accusations that it’s addictive and dangerous— Regan is determined to defend it. But the critics of Elusion come from surprising sources, including Josh, the handsome sceptic with his own personal stakes. As Regan investigates the claims, she discovers a disturbing web of secrets. She will soon have to choose between love and loyalty…a decision that will affect the lives of millions.

Suspense, thrills, and romance fuel this near-future story about the seductive nature of a perfect virtual world, and how far one girl will go to uncover the truth behind the illusions.


I was very excited to read Elusion.  Apart from a beautiful cover it sounded a bit like a YA version of Tad William’s Otherland series and I simply love this idea of entering into Virtual Reality that is so advanced you feel like you are quite literally in another world. Other than it’s unique and exciting concept, Elusion just didn’t really work for me.

The story centres around our protagonist Reagan who is very much in mourning after the death of her father – the creator of Elusion.  Her best friend Patrick is the lead designer after her father dies on the Elusion project and the book starts with the media announcement that Elusion is being rolled out as a product across the country after a successful 3 state trial launch.  From then on Regan starts trying to solve the mystery of Elusion which has some loud opponents questioning it’s very safety, and the mystery of her father’s death.  With the help of a new guy at school Josh, Regan is determined to get behind the firewall and get the answers she’s desperate for.

I’m not really sure where to begin with my problems with this book so I’m just going to vent it all out.  Firstly Regan, gah!!! She really annoyed me!  At the beginning of this book you got a lot of inner dialogue about how close she is with her best friend Patrick. Patrick basically grew up with her and was like a son to her dad who mentored him and brought him into the Elusion project.  For basically no reason at all, she goes from being devoted and loyal to him to getting more and more suspicious, yet in the same breath decides she should trust a total stranger with a questionable past with all of her secrets.  This aspect of the book probably got to me the most, poor Patrick was so vilified and yet he never really did anything to deserve it in my humble opinion and to make matters worse he even stayed loyal to Regan through all of it.

Regan also starts distrusting her mother who is seriously not coping with the death of  her father, yet her dad who clearly had a lot of secrets and was keeping things from her she never once seemed to question.  I was completely dumfounded by the relationships in this book it just seemed totally wrong.

Josh was a very useless two dimensional character and I couldn’t really see the point in his being in the story at all other than to provide a love triangle and it wasn’t even a good love triangle 🙁 The whole romance aspect of this book just didn’t click with me either.  It was quite clichéd and I didn’t feel any chemistry between Regan and Josh or Regan and Patrick for that matter.

The world was interesting and  bleak though there was lots of references to oxygen masks, something called florapetro and acid rain though no background was given to how the world got that way or what this florapetro actually is? I’m assuming that pollution got so bad that this is it for the world of the future hence the need for Elusion which provides everyone with Escapes back to how the world once was. They also had super long work days 12 hours on, 12 hours off and school kids are doing that too which I totally don’t understand either considering since many young kids can barely handle the 9-3 school day let alone double that!

The last part of the novel that I just couldn’t suspend belief over was that Regan’s dad built a firewall into the Elusion system.  Now a firewall is a fairly common thing in internet security terms, what got to me is that this firewall is actually a real, physical wall in the Elusion escapes and apparently if you can find the wall you can get past it with absolutely no technical skills whatsoever.  Now I never studied IT but I did work for Internet Service Providers and web hosting companies for over a decade and I quite simply found this concept completely ridiculous.  If I’m honest I found the idea childish and it was a real disappointment for a number of reasons which I wont mention here as I don’t want to provide any spoilers.

I’m giving this book 2.5 stars as I loved the concept and it was a fast read.  I also really enjoyed reading about the Virtual Reality and the Elusion escapes if only the rest of the story was actually plausible.  It also ended on a cliff-hanger and I probably will pick up the next book simply because I want to know what happens next so  I guess even with all the problems I did get suckered in!

two-half-stars – Great concept, loved the Virtual Reality but the story execution let it down – Philippa

Email | Goodreads | | Twitter | Instagram Philippa lives in Brisbane, Australia with her partner and two daughters. She is an avid reader and reviewer of Young Adult literature as well as being a student midwife, closet geek, procrastibaker and coffee addict.

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